To ALL 5D classmates,if you didn't visited my blog,please read this poem and leave some comments so i can redo the slight changes!thanks!
Everyone who's here today,
Pls listen to what i got to say!
I have a pet cat named Milo,
His voice is not that very low!
His always full of energy,
But blurr when comes to phycolagy!
Milo is very fat,
Not like other cats!
When my friends sees him they are scared,
Milo and I call them scardy-cat!
I also like to play with him,
I also get bitten by him!
We didn't do any invention,but,
Thank you for your kind attention!
Posted by
dina♥
2 comments:
Dear Dina,
Good job! I like reading about your poem.A very good attempt in finding rhyming words. Why did you name your cat Milo? Any interesting stories to share?
Just a little note, you got a small error at the 4th line. His ( He is) always full of energy.Btw, I don't know whats " phycolagy". Any spelling errors there?
Miss Ng
Well.....i love ur poem!^_^
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